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| Wogan May 2006-07-26 ch 1,  | abuseDude ... whatever. |
| Amrun 2005-06-12 ch 1, | abuseI am very honored that you used my word! =D In the second line, there needs to be some punctuation between "dirty" and "it." "Till" is a different word. The REAL, but not often used, abbreviation for "until" is "'til." The rule for abbreviation is to add the apostrophe where the letters were omitted. Also, "eat" should be "ate." Other than that, cute poem. :] |
| Sorrowful Dreams 2005-06-08 ch 1, | abuselol this is quite a unique little poem. I like it ~Sorrow~ |
| Princess Hannah 2005-06-08 ch 1, | abuse...Okay... |