what beautiful images

Adorably imaginative, bittersweet candy kisses melt my heart. Quite memorable.

this is BEAUTIFUL

(you just made my day)

Loved. It. Sort of a subtle Romeo and Juliet ref at the end, eh? Intentinale, maybe. Still, loved it. Still loving it, really.

You're too good for this. Apparently, almost everything you say is poetic, and seemingly every single one of your works deserve praise. How you write it is one question, but what has inspired you so strongly, is one that seems to be answered in your poetry alone. You don't need to express you emotions in any other way...

this is beautiful. on faves

Oh I love this so fucking much. Amazing job, it's perfect. Going into my favs.

oh well...this is life but God is with you so just hold on. thanks for sharing and keep writing!

very optimistic. i like how you compare the relationship to stats.

you are beautiful, no matter what the angel of death may throw in your face. keep telling yourself that everytime he tricks you into thinking that. thanks for sharing and keep writing!

very idealistic and imaginative. this reminds me somewhat of peter pan, especially the part of the boy who can fly. thanks for sharing and keep writing!

This is the best one; I think. Very Romeo and Juliet, but somehow deeper. Brava.

Gives an air of mystery; like glitter covering everything...

Simple and short; well done.

Beautifully abstract. I love the 3rd stanza. And the last line is just perfect.