Reviews for Ostrogothic Funk - FictionPress.com

simpletonsgrin 2005-10-30 ch 1,	abuseI didn't get the reference in the line that stands alone (and I'm feeling tempted to google it...) This was choppy, but the style worked for this piece, so I'm not complaining. -simpleotn BTW... nice summary. Gothic Lolita hasn't sprung up in the states yet, has it? shivers ... I love the japanese, but their individuality/conformity dual-personality is sort of odd.
poetic abortion 2005-06-12 ch 1,	abuseI think you meant ** when you said that. shrugs I really don't care, either way it didn't hurt nor did it bother me. for those who don't have a good or even decent vocabulary this may have become confusing, though some words were somewhat easy. I like: " amazing jellyfish kids and snot-nosed emotion" that line was very clever and ultimetly, made me giggle. I though it was funny. the poem is amazing, unique and well written. I can't find any complaints on it. !~* noelle *~!
addie pray 2005-06-12 ch 1,	abuseLovely and brutal. "Neon tetra turned 90 degrees/Ebony tabula rasa in mahogany" -- my two favourite lines. Well done. Oh, also "rational haze, where that name is a pun//no joke, a valet chevron"...ah, I adore.
Ivy Thorn 2005-06-07 ch 1,	abuseVery delicious flow goin' on here. You have some very steamy word pairings here that are unusual but meld nicely. Rather cryptic, but extremely tasteful. Nice work here. I'd tap that.