This is a very interesting piece! It's so short yet says so much, and leaves so much more unsaid that the reader can guess at. Good job!

very nice, the vagueness is a great touch

Joi! this poem really made me think. It's short but powerful, but in order to see it like that, you have to think about the words and how each line progresses into the next. Great!

P.S.: you have to read the new poems i've written!

i can relate... it hurts~~ wonderful poem~

keep writing!

I like the whole idea of the poem. Good job

I like this, I know you haven't heard from me in a while but its me Brittney!I like poems with like 2 0r 3 words on a line it makes you think about how they link together

It reminds me of two very sad episodes of Futurama. Almost made me cry. Almost.

i think i might know the story behind this one