You know, that was actually amazing. You got the level of simplicity whilst still allowing us to feel really connected to characters just right. The last chapter had me tearing up at the raw intensity of it. Well done.

Sian x

I love the story so far, can't wait to read the rest of it!

This story is brilliant. I like how the story is so simple in terms of writing, yet speak depths of emotion. Love the ending, it really fits Micah's character. Real life is more like this, I mean, do people often have huge romantic scenes when making up? Keep writing!

Cute.

This is a cute story but I guess I feel like it was a little disconnected, and kind of lacked the development that your other stories have. I mean, I guess you did develop their relationship, but it just seemed a bit disjointed and like they had split personalities or something. I guess I just had a really hard time seeing the Micah from before as the Micah now, and connecting them together to be one person. And I feel like we didn't really get to know Lana's character very well either. Everything was really short and unexplained and I guess I just feel like... it just grazed the surface of the events that happened, but didn't actually elaborate on them and go any deeper.

I like the idea though, and the layout of your fic. I guess just more details, maybe extending it... also their fight seemed kind of anti-climatic too. Like they were happy and then they weren't. There wasn't much build up to it, I suppose. But I still like Lana & Micah together. :)

-- Alyssa

I adore your beginning. :) When I read it, it seemed as though I was reading a poem. Nicely done! :) I shall go read the next chapters now. :)

I liked the ending of this one, it was realistic and just.. good for them. The idea for this story was just plain good too, I quite enjoyed it =)

The piece was choppy with the time, making it a tad confusing at times. But it was a sweet and simplistic story and I enjoyed it a lot.

I heart, heart, heart this chapter too!

GAWD YOU WRITE THE FREAKING BEST HEART WRENCHING STORIES and you're as old as I am and I envy you. lol.

i hope to see you published one day!

It was really good! I especially liked how you you intertwined the past and present and made them come full circle. It worked out very well.

wow i was so surprised that you ended it there. aw i was just getting to know and love Lana and Micah! This story was pretty original, especially the layout, but short! I know that's probably what you wanted, but I just feel lyk Lana and Micah deserve a full novel! As you can tell, I've fallen in love with Lana and Micah. ^^"

Nicely written. Love the ending. =)

Well this is fantastic, as usual. I'm falling more and more in love with your style of writing, not to mention your characters. You make their emotions so raw and so real, and yet you still keep it all so simple. Love the happy ending, too. One suggestion, though. You might want to consider adding a 'past' memory to the end of the last chapter? You know, like how some stories put a childhood memory in the epilogue, so everything just seems to come full circle. Yep. Just a thought.

Brilliant.