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| Jeminiah 2008-07-09 ch 2,  | abusegreat story! can't wait to read more |
| lost butterfly angel 2008-06-12 ch 1, | abuseKinda different but it still seems interesting... |
| glamoureste 2008-04-20 ch 25, | abuseWHAT THE HELL? WHAT the hell. what the hell whathte htfatl;kejwkf adlkfjea;lgjgkll; fasdjdsajkafd.j... you ended it? aghgghghghgh... Oh well... :[ please please please make a sequal! well, it says in your author's note that you are so... :] that's brighter. |
| Laney 2008-03-10 ch 25, anon. | abuseNice story! I liked the plot and the ending, that she has changed in some ways but she's still fragile and people don't see that. I understand that others think she's self-absorbed with her own problems and only thinks about herself. But honestly, her life has changed dramatically the last few months, she's stepped into a new world and doesn't know how to handle it. I don't think they have cut her some slack. Cause Ashton has never really fought for her but expected her to like him and come to him. Sure he has tried a few times to tell her how he feels. But he doesn't understand her situation, with feeling she can never be good enough. One thing that Kyle said which was true, was that they don't know each other, they aren't friends. Without being friends how can you like each other? or know one another? Can't wait to read the sequel! |
| locks92 2007-11-19 ch 25, | abuseOMG! I cried!! OMG!!...wait... SEQUEL? yay! I'm doing my joy dance, I hope I don't cry at the end of that one though!! Hurry pliz! No pressure ;);) |
| Enaid 2007-11-06 ch 25, | abuseomg im gonna start crying. thats so sad. how can Ashton not come back. yes i agree that u r evil. lol not really but really liked this story. im off to read the sequel. |
| Enaid 2007-11-06 ch 13, | abusebaahaha go Ace shes awesome. i hope they get to go on triple dates soon ^-^ |
| Enaid 2007-11-06 ch 12, | abuseaw ashton's so sweet. im really glad the other two have gfs cause now that frees kyle up from feeling bad about being w/ another guy. Yay! well im off to read more i |
| iheartcarebears 2007-08-15 ch 25, | abuseThatwas so sweet how ashton ran after her too bad shes gone though anyway I think your story is really great and I wanted to say great job I love getting and giving reviews its just so fun isn't it? -peace out :) |
| iheartcarebears 2007-08-15 ch 8, | abuseI love this story and Kyle sounds like a really sweet girl and I also like Ty his name is so cool :) |
| fatso17 2007-06-22 ch 25, | abuseDude, that was a beaut story! you know, as much as i want to throttle you for ending the story this way, after reading about all the pain and emotion of the main chrachter, i have to say, it's a bitter sweet ending. i like it... even if i do want a happy ending, this is more unique and leaves us readers with room for imagination. *wipes tears* so sad.. oh by the way, you've used two spellings of Kyle's brother's name: Leaf at the beginning and at the end, and Lief in the middle. i was sort of confused when i read the middle because of this. yeah, just an error you could/should fix. :D once again, brilliant story! |
| misery-business22 2007-06-09 ch 25, | abusesad but great story though... off to read the sequel |
| Deafgurl's world 2007-06-08 ch 25, | abuseHey wow this is so sad story i ever read. Its good story..I understand why Kylie decide go to New York to forget about Ashton. I understand that. So i just wonder why does she keep journal? Wow her step - siter Rosaline is so sweet and i hope she will be fine while Kyle is gone for three months. Thats why i read this first before i going read second one :) |
| mo 2007-06-04 ch 25, anon. | abuseGreat story! like it much |
| ryror0x 2007-05-02 ch 11, | abusecraig... *drools* how can u make them out to be the bad guys (sort not really too much) emo/punk guys in girls jeans are so f*ing hot! yummi! perty good chapter. yay! |