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| Shades Of A Tulip 2006-11-20 ch 1,  | abuseAw...this is adorable! This is great, detailed, flowing, and I can picture it in my head. Good work, and please continue writing. |
| Aria Otaka 2006-11-10 ch 1, | abuseI'm that nerd in disguise! :) |
| EedgeHead 2006-05-23 ch 1, | abuseGreat Poem! I know exactly how you feel, Im in a similar situation. |
| Sophie Ulquiorra Allen 2005-11-24 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. I loved it so much. Very descriptive, and it reminds me of me (if you get my drift) |
| Strikeout 2005-08-13 ch 1, | abuseMy man is a teacher and he seriously could be the teacher in this poem! I've seen his pupils fall all over him and he acts in exactly the same way. Heh, that's really got me smiling! It really is him! |
| pencilchewer 2005-07-13 ch 1, | abuseI like this I cant really relate ( all my teachers are women) but I really liked this poem |
| Kicking Poe 2005-06-09 ch 1, | abuseAlthough the subject matter is a little...disturbing (for me, anyway; I've never had a crushworthy teacher) the poem itself is quite good. And I can totally relate to the "nerd disguise!" Keep up the good work. |
| cynical-dreams 2005-06-08 ch 1, | abuseI can really picture the situation. You did a great job phrasing; It's very smooth. I want to see more! |