|Reviews for Wind, Flower, Snow, Moon|
| Mrs P 10/31/11 . chapter 1
Snow works best for me, I think it is the contrast again, gentle fragile things are not supposed to burn :-) And the life and death of the flowers is an interesting theme. Moon? Comes across as a very comforting image; a constant at all phases. Wind- a more playful, affectionate image-blowing away the cobwebs:-)
Delighted that I looked at your work:-)
| the twinkling of an eye 6/10/05 . chapter 1
Very nice work! Flower and Snow could use some punctuation so that they flow better, but other than that, excellent job!
| somerandomdude 6/9/05 . chapter 1
Wonderful evocation of nature, excellent! I love all of them, but particularly "Flower": "Not the same flowers." Very nice.
| Kicking Poe 6/9/05 . chapter 1
All of these are very good. I especially like "Snow" and "Moon." Nice job!
| Nobody-n-Particular 6/8/05 . chapter 1
Beautiful depiction of nature.
| Princess-anna57 6/7/05 . chapter 1
These are great haikus! Completely gorgeous! Write on!