| Reviews for Wind, Flower, Snow, Moon |
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Mrs P 10/31/11 . chapter 1 Snow works best for me, I think it is the contrast again, gentle fragile things are not supposed to burn :-) And the life and death of the flowers is an interesting theme. Moon? Comes across as a very comforting image; a constant at all phases. Wind- a more playful, affectionate image-blowing away the cobwebs:-) Delighted that I looked at your work:-) Mrs P:-) |
the twinkling of an eye 6/10/05 . chapter 1Very nice work! Flower and Snow could use some punctuation so that they flow better, but other than that, excellent job! |
somerandomdude 6/9/05 . chapter 1Wonderful evocation of nature, excellent! I love all of them, but particularly "Flower": "Not the same flowers." Very nice. |
Kicking Poe 6/9/05 . chapter 1All of these are very good. I especially like "Snow" and "Moon." Nice job! |
Nobody-n-Particular 6/8/05 . chapter 1Beautiful depiction of nature. |
Princess-anna57 6/7/05 . chapter 1These are great haikus! Completely gorgeous! Write on! Anna |