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| Wena61 2006-01-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhoever you love is lucky to have you love them so much you'd do anyhthing. This is an amazing story. |
| umbrius 2005-06-08 ch 1, | abuseJOE: Wow... KYR: (cries) JOE: That poem, its like a knife to the heart. KYR: Love, the most beautiful and most dangerous thing in existance. JOE: Wehave not allowed anyone to see our poetry... KYR: ...but perhaps soon... |
| thank you thoughtful 2005-06-08 ch 1, | abusei love the last few lines the most. it is a hopeful reminder of the healing power of love. you've done an excellent job in this piece, EXCELLENT. |