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| GC Age 2005-06-08 ch 1,  | abusethis tne was better then the other poems! Although the word pointless seems to be very weak after a while. One sugestion if perhaps are willing to give up the form of the poem I suggest on using "a liffe with out meaning" and "I a life with no fruit" (oh boy am i good lol) |