you're really brilliant at using words. i appluad you!

very cool

I think this could be about fait and soulmates. I like it though. Well done

I love this.

I agree, I think its short, but it is good.

Thats really good! You should make it longer though. Keep writing!

I know what you mean. It's like when you see someone, and for no reason, your stomech just drops. Or, when you look breifly into someones eyes and know how they feel. Short, sweet and meaningful, nice job.