Splendid. The story flows in a perfect circle. I really enjoyed reading your story till the point of addiction, where i neglected my other necessities.

Dude! This story's soo good..I really liked it! Makes me wonder why the hell it hasn't got more reviews? Oh well, ppl don't know what they're missing. Great story seriously..and I'm adding this to my faves whether you like it or not :p

Gotta love that humor. How come I didn't even get a whiff of it when I was reading your other story? Maybe I wasn't looking hard enough.

Now, I have a question. Yes, a question. Why is the rating for this story M? Now, the other "M" stories I've read, I've started reviewing, and then by the fifth chapter, I have to cover my own eyes while reading. How that works, I don't even know... And then I have to sadly go find another story, because I don't believe in porn in the form of words. (Also, because of my mom's voice, also known as my conscience, shouting in my ear).

And if you're asking why I'm reading your story despite my previous experiences with stories of that particular rating? Because I heard that there was a 'dashing' hero to be found saving the day. And as I'm sure you must know by now, I am not one to pass up one of them dashing young men. [Grin].

So, Mr. Stikup is our dashing hero, then? Please don't tell me you modeled him after yourself... =)

omg, that was so amazing! wow, i am totally in awe...wonderful! aw, i loved it...i cant believe how good you did building up to the last chapter, and then letting it all out... fantastic...totally on my faves

marionette/lexa

wow, thats all i can say...

omg, its getting so good, i dont wanna take the time to review, so im gonna go read!

MENDOZA! i thinks this be really good...wow, on with the rest...

very good introductory chapter, enjoyed it...on with the story...

Wow, that was a good story. :-) The suspense built well, and though I suspected Mendoza it wasn't *too* obvious. :-)

Good ending! This story is now my favorite that I've read.

I like it! And I *knew* it!

Good chapter... I'm not saying anything else till I read the rest of the story...

Whew, it took me three times to finally finish this. Distractions... I like this story so much! It's a new favorite!

Great chapter. I loved the ending. Sarcasm is awesome. Do the hunting guns have some connection to Mendoza? Onward...KB

Interesting, very good. Poor Jill and Chance, bet it's awkward.Typo...When Jill's face turns red- it's not "beat", it's "beet"