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| windoze 2005-10-04 ch 1,  | abuseI won't try to describe how good it is. It is quite good - especially the imagery and the diction. Sometimes simpler words dont truely say enough, so your words have the deeper evocative sense. I love the image of the petal tumbling into wet grass. |
| Joewhatever 2005-09-11 ch 1, | abuseliked those last two lines a lot... nice written poem... |
| citrus scented 2005-08-06 ch 1, | abusethis is beautiful. some really powerful and incredibly striking images used- very effective descriptions. they really conjure of vivid images and feelings. wonderful choice of words, brilliant, cleverly written piece. |
| Cyssel 2005-07-29 ch 1, | abuseUnique imagery and comparisons. Not bad. |
| MR.SEAN 2005-06-09 ch 1, | abuseI really like this the last couple lines are cool! |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-06-08 ch 1, | abuseSuch a stream of possibilities. |
| mezzie 2005-06-08 ch 1, | abuse"shudderlongingly" - oh that is good so good...you caught the impression perfectly here, of always just beyond or just missed or just out-of-reach. loved it. mezzie |