This is a good start for the story. Though, did you put this through spell check? There are numerous spelling errors that can be easily checked in a word processor.

I hope you update soon.

Yours,Regnet

yes Kris im happy now haha lol. i love it. I dont feel like typing much more and i have alredy told you how much your story rocks.

~Becca

Yayayayayayay! Dude - your story ROCKS. And I'm completely surprised (but totally happy!) that I'm your first reviewer. :D

PPLEASE UPDATE!

Arthadius is TOTALLY freaking hot. :D~Kait