I really like this poem too and as for the formatting issue - I think I've just realized the answer - you have to use "story format" when you upload. I also grumbled over that predicament.

Very nice, I enjoy immensely.

i love this one because it seems like the only thing that excites people anymore is technology. there is no mystery or enchantment left in nature. sometimes i wish i could just find a place where there arent any sky-scrapers or parking lots to be seen. as if such a place will ever exist before long.