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TheyCallMeCyclone 2008-06-06 . chapter 2
i like the second chapter better than the first.
blackrose214 2008-03-20 . chapter 2
Hey there. Another ery interesti story. Another addition to my list of favourites and another story I`m waiting for n update for. :)
Pyreflei 2006-04-20 . chapter 2
I find this whole thing interesting. If you and your companion Jill ever update this again, I'll be sure to look at it.~Ciao
Pyreflei 2006-04-20 . chapter 1
I like this. It has a certain morbid facination to it, especially with dear Bailey's kick-**-or-die attitude.I'll certainly keep reading.
Skitty Pink 2005-08-30 . chapter 2
great writing! 2nd chapter was great!i wanna know what happens next... *jumps around impatiently*
afk 2005-08-17 . chapter 2
i'm really loving this, flash backs and the whole story is way kinky and interesting, i wanna know who eric was XD
Ladako 2005-08-17 . chapter 2
So technically he really was working for a Drug Lord. But he wouldn't tell them because he loved the guy? Wait, then did Emilio really betray him? That's what the counsler said. Was it true? Well great chapter! I really actually did like it! C ya!
Rosemarykiss 2005-08-17 . chapter 2
Interesting, I would like to see how that relationship turns out^_^;;
ATH-dreams 2005-08-17 . chapter 2
Ok i finnally just got that lol.

~aware!~
Gayle of Genisis 2005-08-17 . chapter 2
Wow that was even more interesting than the first chapter. So his real name is Russell, well its still a gay name, but less gay then Bailey. Update soon.
xanthofile 2005-08-16 . chapter 2
oh wow, i had to reread the previous chapter to remember what was going on!! but i'm glad i took the time...i loved this chapter.

russel...that does suit him much better than bailey. i like it.
Lucifer's Sonata 2005-08-16 . chapter 2
excelent chapter! A little strange... but that's only because I couldn't imagine cuddling up to someone I just saw kill a bunch of men. ^^;; But interesting character that Russ is ^^ please update soon!
Kittentits 2005-08-16 . chapter 2
*evil manic laugh*i know something you dont know jinnyhahahaok..anywayi loved thiscomplete and utter adoration for this chapterI can't wait for morewhich means you must post moreyesone of you..-_-i want moreso get to itI kinda like EmilioHe seems like a cool character.hummdidity.bye bye loves to both*huggles*
Kitsune Luver 2005-07-27 . chapter 1
Wow. Why is it that whenever you start a really good story, you don't update for months. I miss reading your new stuff. This story sounds like it would be so interesting if you continued it. I totally understand if you don't have time to write right now, but I miss your writing. Please Please PLEASE update something soon. You are my favorite author and I luv ur writing. Oh well. Have a nice summer.
Hayden Leslie Gaines 2005-07-14 . chapter 1
I like it. Write more.
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