very sweet and real I felt so connected to this poem.Made my day thanks for the review ^_^

Lovely! Such sweet tenderness. Keep on writing! :)

Nice poem. I liked the rhyme. Hope you keep writing.

Very clever rhyming, I like it. Oh, this poem makes me think . . . I especially like the first and last stanzas, the same first line, with the rest changed ever so slightly and having such a different meaning. This is just lovely.