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| K. T. Wood 2005-06-09 ch 1,   | Wow. That was awesome. I liked the way you repeated "that Carla" worked really well. I don't know why. But the story sort of whithered away at the end. Not that it wasn't good- but just that the start was so fantastic...and well...I don't know. I really shouldn't make statements without things to back them up with...Anyway! I did love it. Off to read more of your stuff..Awesome work. |