I really enjoy this story, hope you update soon on what happens with the seal and everything.

please continue!

wow... you should really continue with this

BWHs is a most awesomeness story! I'd of eventually thought of using spirits and normals in my stories. That is if I ever get those bloody stories through to the public eye and what not. Oh yes super great work with the prophesy bit! Mine never seem to appear on the screen, my prophesies I mean. Doesn't matter how much dagger glaring and mind power I throw at whatever I happen to be writing on at the time. Your story has truelly inspired me. I think I'm going to go throw it to the wolves, er I mean FP right now and see how many will find it fairly easy to digest. First I got to go get it of course.

Well anyways so sorry for blathering on and on like an idiot. I blame your most fabulous story for making me loose my mind and my will to control my fingers hovering over this old keyboard! If you find this blathering hilarious good for you, thats what I was aiming for. My email is

Just incase ya wana blather at me some.

Eagerly awaiting more of BWHs!

you're a GENIUS!
i really love this, it's very original... but you left it?!? for good?? i there any chance that you're going to update it??
i hopehopehope so!

This is really good! I love Milo, he's my favorite character I think.
I am excited for this to be updated soon.
It's very interesting.

Stupid! Everyone knows you don't read aloud from the magic books!

XD

I hope you come back to writing this.

I think it's safe to assume that you've dropped this story, and that it'll probably remain incomplete forever. I really can't complain, because I do that all the time myself.

But sheesh, this is a great story! It really draws you in, and the concept is so unique and fantastic, yet somehow you keep the whole thing grounded. Your characters are all compelling and real. My only complaint is that I got into it without realizing that *sniff* I'll never know how it ends!

Oi. Cliffhanger. Do you update this? I should've checked before I read it. I like it; I'm definitely intrigued and wanting to read more.

you can't just leave us hanging!~!

;_;

That was awesome! I am going to search through your page now to see if there is more to this wonderful story!

this story is AMAZING. i was disappointed when i realized it hasn't been updated in so long. i hope you find the motivation to continue working on it. i'd really love to see what else you have planned for it. :)

Wow. This is absolutely wonderful. One of the best things I've ever read on fictionpress. I hope you'll decide to finish it. It really is great.

Umm, what happened to the rest of the story? This is a great story and I would love more of it.

Wow. So, this story is amazing so far. I'm surprised I'm just now finding this, but it's awesome. Like, a cross between Ghostbusters and Neverwhere. But good. And the characterization are amazing. You manage to get them perfectly so that all the stuff that would be really corny otherwise just isn't. And Milo is really cute. I like him. Why was he on death row? I feel bad for him, 'cause he's adorable and insecure. I feel bad for Elijah too--what with spending half his life with shrinks/therapists and then having his parents (or, at least, entities who look like his parents) turn on him. That's gotta suck.

So, this is an amazing story so far. Um, please update?