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| A.L.D. 2008-04-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseI think it's safe to assume that you've dropped this story, and that it'll probably remain incomplete forever. I really can't complain, because I do that all the time myself. But sheesh, this is a great story! It really draws you in, and the concept is so unique and fantastic, yet somehow you keep the whole thing grounded. Your characters are all compelling and real. My only complaint is that I got into it without realizing that *sniff* I'll never know how it ends! |
| x-princessa-temnoti-x 2008-02-16 ch 6,  | abuseOi. Cliffhanger. Do you update this? I should've checked before I read it. I like it; I'm definitely intrigued and wanting to read more. |
| ai_08 2007-12-23 ch 6, anon. | abuseyou can't just leave us hanging!~! ;_; |
| SesshoumaruTakahashi 2007-12-02 ch 6, | abuseThat was awesome! I am going to search through your page now to see if there is more to this wonderful story! |
| fiona phobia 2007-09-17 ch 1, anon. | abusethis story is AMAZING. i was disappointed when i realized it hasn't been updated in so long. i hope you find the motivation to continue working on it. i'd really love to see what else you have planned for it. :) |
| animebuddy 2007-07-11 ch 6, | abuseWow. This is absolutely wonderful. One of the best things I've ever read on fictionpress. I hope you'll decide to finish it. It really is great. |
| Love Eternally 2007-06-04 ch 6, | abuseUmm, what happened to the rest of the story? This is a great story and I would love more of it. |
| Reason vs. Rhyme 2007-02-09 ch 6, | abuseWow. So, this story is amazing so far. I'm surprised I'm just now finding this, but it's awesome. Like, a cross between Ghostbusters and Neverwhere. But good. And the characterization are amazing. You manage to get them perfectly so that all the stuff that would be really corny otherwise just isn't. And Milo is really cute. I like him. Why was he on death row? I feel bad for him, 'cause he's adorable and insecure. I feel bad for Elijah too--what with spending half his life with shrinks/therapists and then having his parents (or, at least, entities who look like his parents) turn on him. That's gotta suck. So, this is an amazing story so far. Um, please update? |
| Mailechan 2007-01-03 ch 5, | abuseIs it just me, or is Ben really Profoundly Stupid? *loves you SO MUCH* |
| Mailechan 2006-12-28 ch 6, | abuseHah! I found you! *tackleglomps* Now write more horns and seaweed hair! |
| beloved18 2006-12-16 ch 6, | abuseoh come on no fare i wanted to read more of this *pouts* |
| Half-BloodGrlPirate 2006-10-28 ch 2, | abuseWow. I mean seriously wow. This is great. Really. I have been officially rendered speechless. You're the first to do it. Or at least I think so. Good Job! Wow. I can't stop smiling. I love Tier and I love Elijah. Really good job. Fantastic. Good-Bye and I'll keep reading., B.J.-Half-BloodGrlPirate |
| Escagirl 2006-10-25 ch 6, | abuseI just got a flashback to Dexters Labratory... when DeeDee pushed the Big Red Button of Doom of the episode. Yup, very much enjoying this fic. Update soon, okies? I wanna know what happens next! What trouble Ben and his uncontrollable Seal-Touching urges have put them all in. |
| lilylupin7 2006-07-14 ch 6, | abuseO really cool story. Update please :) |
| Lami 2006-07-10 ch 6, | abusegah! cliff hanger? no! and i think i have now read everything you have posted, so i really hope you update soon:) |