This is really sad. The ryhme scheme works really well, it really draws you through. I think that it falters a little at 'platonically' which seems a little contrived, but other than that, this is great. I love the repetition throughout, it stresses the point nicely. Good poem.

I like the rhymes a lot. The emotions here are great, especially through the questions. I love the ending. So bittersweet.

It flows perfectly. The back and forth options and everything just runs smoothly.

Heartbreaking, but isn't that always the case. I think we can all relate to this on some level, and it's always painful. Amazing job with this.

Wow, that's really well written. I think everyone's felt this way at least once which makes it so good, everyone can relate. Thanks for the review.

S.O.S x

I think many people can understand and relate to your poem... especially teenage girls. Ah, the complications of love. I enjoyed this poem. The rhyming was well done and didn't sound forced. You totally made what could have been a cliqued poem an original piece. Good job. -Micah

I can relate completely. Wonderful job

this carries a light mood but it lingers in your mouth, i love the why your rythm without making it sound too intentional. if you keep this mood it will be something to look forward to when i need a taste