This poem is very Inspiering, i really wish i could think of poems this good. but unfoprtunatly my poetic spurt has diminished. you've probably heard this alot already but here it goes: what an interesting topic, to write that much about a spider whows how talented you are. much respect ~William

WOW! you got all that out of watching a spider? KEWL!Its great when such first thought menial things of nature, really get us to notice the beauty;inspiring!~TRW

This is so beautiful! I don't know how to describe it!

erhm... simple & concise. dislike the commas at the end of each line. like the thought behind it. done.

-salt.

Lovely flow. I love the short length of the lines, they convey a simplistic beauty.

lovely, this is a new change for you Hip! If anything, I think this is your best piece by far. -ADD

I've read a few other poems about spider's weaving their webs here, but I find yours the most descriptive and well done. Wonderfully written.

nice. i liked it, a lot! Never thought that a "spider" could be an inspiration. Gj! I liked this poem. =)

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Awesome poem. Love your idea :)

Lovely. I happen to love spiders, which s apparently unusual, though I've never gotten to see one actually make their web. I love the rhyming, it definitely adds to the rhythm. The only thing that I didn't like about the poem was the comma after every line, whether or not there should have been one. I think your rhythm (DA da DA, DA da DA) shows clearly enough even without writing in the break between lines. But I love your wording -- fabulous!

I really like the topic! someting different! very Cool. thinks it amazing how much you can actually write about a simple thing such as a spider making it's web!

Good job!Thumbs up!-Helene