|Reviews for color spectrum|
| daphnegray78 6/29/05 . chapter 1
I love this. The formatting pushes the tempo along, giveing it this vibrant feeling as if the poem has come to life. And, of course, I completely agree with everyone that the last two lines are bloody brilliant. Well done!
This is going on my favs.
| GypsyMothra 6/22/05 . chapter 1
Love the message and love the structure. A nice mix of everything. Beautiful to read and look at.
| AboveTheSalt 6/18/05 . chapter 1
loved the downwards words. great title, great force & feeling. love the message & the subtlety. great job.
| do not resuscitate 6/16/05 . chapter 1
this is brilliant. god, and those last two lines...::sighes::
| simpleplan13 6/13/05 . chapter 1
| pneumothorax 6/13/05 . chapter 1
Seems like a heavy mix of all the poetry formats you can get; CAPS no caps/()w-o-r-d-s likethisand .
Parts work well, like the downwards glides, but 'through metallic/(pores)' the use of (pores) seems pointless.
'raw/bleeding/bruised/battered' Again, this works well - 'as if take your pick'.
The last two verses are gold. Brilliant. (and coincidentally I've read something similar just before)
| compunctious 6/10/05 . chapter 1
Every time I read a poem about homosexuality it has a childish vibe about it. This one doesn't. I really like it alot.
| kalmia raphael 6/9/05 . chapter 1
sounds like loveabuse, an abusive relationship. form-wise it is VERY pretty. i just glanced at it once before reading it and it looked well... visually pleasing ; i love the.. revolutionary aspect in your poetry. something religious in here too.
| twenty-second seduction 6/9/05 . chapter 1
"he has no shame/(and i envy that"you are amazing. definatly going on my favorites list.
| Nobody-n-Particular 6/9/05 . chapter 1
Really nice. I love your stuff.
| poetic abortion 6/9/05 . chapter 1
beautiful and in all honesty just amazing. well worded and deep, though a bit creepy and tragic. lovely.
!* noelle *!