It's so sad! I hope this isn't how you're actually feeling. Well, hopefully writing and getting it all out will help. It works for some people. Anyway, nice poem. :)

-Sarah

wow!

+SpiLLeD InK+

Very deep poem. Well done! -NB

Nice and dark. I know what the "little voices" feel like, and your poem reflects them well.

very nice. angsty and makes you think. i like the "choppy" one-word lines. think of that as a compliment, because it is. ^_^--kwazykandypie AKA Kelly Ann--

oh such a tragic and vividly painful poem! you get alot of emotion in it, i love the descriptions: "With my liquid frown" just wonderful. very sad & touching.