wow- u reviewed one of my- "not well written" stories (Tragically in LOVE?) and asked me to review a story of yours. I enjoy poetry so much that I decided to review ur most recent poem. this failed to meet what I thought it would- INSTEAD WAS ONE OF THE MOST AMAZING THINGS I have read. Thank you for reviewing my story and for the construvtive critism (i live w/ a bulimic and think i captured it okay :-)!) but really- this is amazing. :-D I hope to see more soon.

Neat. Not normal, the things described, but... very well described.

this poem touched me. and i bet people can relate. it was...really good. all the lines were great. --kwazykandypie AKA Kelly Ann--

Hey babez wel done on this one love it to bits, anyhu's how's the J.C going 4 ya? Oh and well done on the poem loved it! *~*~ Love and bubbles ~*~* Auralay

Really abstract, but I was able to relate to most of it. Great job!