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samantha 2008-12-29 . chapter 4
ilike it a lot
OrientalEmerald 2008-09-25 . chapter 4
Another one of your stories I love that hasn't been updated in ages! Oh No's! I hope you do update sometime, this has too much potential to be left hanging!
Arastel 2008-08-19 . chapter 4
This is such an interesting story, I hope it isn't given up on. Please update this one soon.
Dark-Passion67 2008-08-06 . chapter 4
Oh, this stroy is amazing!
I hope you update soon:)
Go Trista!
Scared Loveless 2008-06-19 . chapter 4
I have heard that eating can be good for you, but it's just a rumor, never believed it. You write very well, and I particularly like this story, it has something, I'm not sure exactly what yet, but it is there.
Carina 2008-04-27 . chapter 4
Please please please write some more! I love this story and can't wait to see what happens and where it goes.
alayahop 2007-10-31 . chapter 1
Just found the story. Why, oh why you're not updating?! "One last breath" has so much potential. Please try to complete this story.
Semicharmed love 2006-12-16 . chapter 4
Haha. This story is really funny. Especially when Trista and Teigan were fighting in the pond. Update soon? :D
akaCHEEKS 2006-12-11 . chapter 4
dang the last time you updated was like a year ago... omg! wow!
akaCHEEKS 2006-12-11 . chapter 2
oh shit! ok i just started reading this chapter but already i love this guy! wellz except for the skinny super skinny and blue hair part.. cause i like my punks big, muscled not too much and kinda chubby enough to get into a fight and win.. and also to have like normal hair as any other guy.. maybe spiked up or something iono.. but yes.. i love the eyebrow piercing and the lip piercing! oh! i love it in the middle i think it's soo hot! man! nice job!
HannahMarie*Willow 2006-09-24 . chapter 4
Quite an interesting read, I liked how Tier's friends actually all liked her in ch3. Would like to know what happened next.
Faye 2006-08-22 . chapter 4
bahaha! i likes Trista, i think she'll win against Tiergan..>>
DMLpacker 2006-08-20 . chapter 3
This is cute. I really like it. Update soon and I'll give you an imaginary cookie ^_-
Skeeter the Groundhog 2006-07-26 . chapter 4
Hey! This story is fun! You've kind of disappeared off the face of the planet, but it would be really awsome if you updated soon! This is a really great beginning, so I'm going to stick it under my favorites, and since you have 2+ stories on my favorites, you are officially one of my favorite authors. Congradulations and keep it up!
KirstenInwe 2006-02-22 . chapter 4
heey!

This story is pretty cool.I would love to read more of it!

I've also read the Saige/Aiden story wich was also very good.

ttyl Kirsten-Inwe
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