Woah man...craziness...deep, creepy, feeling...I like the mention of the graves.

Even though there wasnt much rhyme, I really liked that poem. And beecause Im in such a dellusional state at the moment... the imagery just came flooding in. Great work ~Vlad

i love the title you've formulated for this. i believe it fits perfectly. you weave words in such a way that the audience becomes effectively chilled and that is an enviable talent. well done!

Ooh... that's a gruesome picture you paint =)

Almost everytime there was a period, it halted the flow of the poem. Coincidentally, I stopped and actually reread each sentence with each period, and the true atmosphere bled into me. Intentional or not, it makes for a decent poem.