persua me to believe the wrong...persuade

love the ending

good job! ^_^ something different, great job!

SP

Good rhythm and great emotion. Not sure about the repetition of 'so' in the last two lines, and I think you mean 'persude' and 'too' in the 4th n 3rd lines from the end, otherwise a brilliant poem that really puts all th emotion across.

...I like the poem but i find it so wrong that u were abused.