Reviews for In the Sea's Embrace

Lily Lady of Legend 2006-09-16 ch 1,	abusehuh. So confused. But pretty good for a shortie! The lines are a wee bit repetitve. Otherwise, thought-provoking (obviously) and i like how you snuck in a little bit of a chorus-y thing.
Poe DeLasVegas 2005-07-04 ch 1,	abuseI really like this poem. It is vivid, like the dream, and I can really feel the urgency and odd feelings that seem to nestle in dreams. Good job! The only thing I would do is perhaps re-word a little of it so you have a better rhythm: it seems to have very little flow.
Smeagol Fasir Kenobi 2005-06-21 ch 1,	abuseHm, interesting. :) You're right; it's definitely very vivid. And reading it, you can almost tell it's from a dream. I've had a couple strange dreams, but nothing quite like this. Very good, mellon nin.Namarie--Smeagol Fasir Kenobi
Fool of Amaranthine 2005-06-15 ch 1,	abuseGuess what? I read the sparkly poem! And I enjoyed it. But you used blue stones to describe it a bit too often, along with the word mosiac...sorry if I sounded rude! ~Phoenix
BlueDragonGirl1 2005-06-10 ch 1,	abuseVery cool.