Wow... this story had a LOT going on.

I like how you actually had a completed plot line. I know, that should be obvious for writers, but none of my stories have ever been completed...except for schoo...so i bow down to you...

Very well written story. The ending was not what I expected. You took the more compassionate approach of actually giving a second chance. Interesting choice, and you pulled it off very well. Nice work.

I won't go into the scientific intricasies of contemporary time travel, but I'll say right now this was a very well written story, and unlike many stories I have read on this site it actually had a moral!Looking foward to your next works,

Edward

I liked the ending, a surprise twist! Most time travel stories are always like, "If you change time, you will be happier." but this one had more of a message. Everything happens for a reason ;) So true!

It's kinda short to tell much about it. I really suggest you write more to the chapter, because an entire chapter (esp. the first) comprised of what he said, she said isn't too interesting. Needless to say, when you write more, I'll read it.