I've read your first two poems completely randomly after i saw your new one on the "just in" thing. usually there's just a bunch of crap poems on this website; a bunch of hormonal, angsty teens who shouldnt, but do write poetry. i'd like to congratulate you on not being one of those people. you have a very unique style that i cant quite grasp but totally love. and the tone you use is somewhat sarcastic and ironic (correct?) which i like. keep up the great work.

This is amazing. I love 'cover tears with glitter and/pretend I'm spinning when I fall.' The last line is perfect. Beautifully done!

Love the last two stanzas. Everything is potrayed in a very real sense, which is unlike you. Not that it's a bad thing. I do like the style, though. Nice job.

and that's the attitude to have, sweetheart, because God is with you! thanks for sharing and keep writing!