This was very entertaining and well written...

it's doesn't matter that it was short...

i like it this way :)

DixieAusten

Lovely truth

Oh I like this one alot, I think your opening lnes are so strong in your one-shots it really catches the readers eye. Great one-shot even if it is quite short - Alyssa

Wow. That was pretty amazing. Love how it's written.

Good job.

this utterly sux.

ur a bad author.

i hate this.

u culd hav done better. that is, if u had any writing talent. which u obviously don't, cing as how this sux.

don't flame savvy's story Wanna Play A Game. it is truly a work of art, and u ruined the good story by saying it sucked wen u don't rite very good.

dpts gf.

that's hebrew 4 ya, try 2 figure it out, if u can. which i doubt u can.

AWW.

e!...ellie..i love it soo much...and don't even think about adding to it! it is soo perfect exactly how it is...and i think that any more would detract from the message it has...claps for elle!i luv ya darling!1

it's nice, it really is...but i'd you more if you updated chasing mussolini! *pout* it's been...forever...

this was really sad though...man, that would suck, knowing that he's gonna get smashed anyways...-_-...dang i'd dump him...

s,Jenni

YAY I'm sitting right next to you but i still think it is awesome! bravo

*muah* Chelsita

I liked that lots! Just... I feel kind of like you left us hanging. It's okay the way it is, but I'd love to have more details. Like, more description bout why she's still going for this party with him (okay, we can all assume love, but added words add layers to the story...). and, well, I want to see her proven right (sounds damn sadistic). yeah, aftermath of THIS party. Watching her (struggle to) bring him home. Would've added more flavour, maybe? But a great piece all the same!

hey - great job. i liked it a lot... well done _

Max W.