well i am, here! to review each and every single chappe. excellent work, guillemot. this story is really hooking. i'm sorry i didn't know about this sooner :| haha
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great chapter. i love the last line as well :) Larien must be feeling a heck of a lot better just to hear that. i think i'm going to have to re-read your first chapter because i don't think i was paying as much attention :|
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sweet stuff. i'm loving this story so much :)
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nice :) i'm sorry i leave short reviews(i don't even know if you're reading them) and usually i leave really long ones. but i guess this story speaks for itself :) i'm glad your chapters are short. too long chapters usually turn me off
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great chapter. where's this going, though?
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awesome. i'm completely in love wth this story. i'm glad susannah told me bout this story :)
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aw, poor larien. i've fallen in love with him already. let's see how this plays out.
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wonderful story. i am totally in love with this. glad you showed vardel's thinking. keeps in mind that all characters aren't just plain good and innocent or evil and loathesome.
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love the flow. cliffhangerish, too :)
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2nd place :) good job. even tho its a bit late. i mean the congrats. ...was a bit late. ah, u know what i mean.
nice chapter, i love how this is going along. me, being as lost as i am, am reading more just so i understand fully.
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this one a bit short. but no worries. but i don't get it. if his hair fell around his face, wouldn't we not be able to see his ears..?
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very hooky. as in easy to get hooked on.
i'm totally clueless about this, yet i can't wait to read more. weird.
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interesting. i can admit i was totally lost at the beginning, though.
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descriptive.
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GAH more more more MORE! please omg i love this and i'm gonna DIE until the next chapter is up. GAHH. next chapter please. i love it. (if you can't tell...lol) LOVE IT!