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| Vesta J 2007-08-07 ch 14,   | well i am, here! to review each and every single chappe. excellent work, guillemot. this story is really hooking. i'm sorry i didn't know about this sooner :| haha -vesta |
| Vesta J 2007-08-07 ch 13, | great chapter. i love the last line as well :) Larien must be feeling a heck of a lot better just to hear that. i think i'm going to have to re-read your first chapter because i don't think i was paying as much attention :| -vesta |
| Vesta J 2007-08-07 ch 12, | sweet stuff. i'm loving this story so much :) -vesta |
| Vesta J 2007-08-07 ch 11, | nice :) i'm sorry i leave short reviews(i don't even know if you're reading them) and usually i leave really long ones. but i guess this story speaks for itself :) i'm glad your chapters are short. too long chapters usually turn me off -vesta |
| Vesta J 2007-08-07 ch 10, | great chapter. where's this going, though? -vesta |
| Vesta J 2007-08-07 ch 9, | awesome. i'm completely in love wth this story. i'm glad susannah told me bout this story :) -vesta |
| Vesta J 2007-08-07 ch 8, | aw, poor larien. i've fallen in love with him already. let's see how this plays out. -vesta |
| Vesta J 2007-08-07 ch 7, | wonderful story. i am totally in love with this. glad you showed vardel's thinking. keeps in mind that all characters aren't just plain good and innocent or evil and loathesome. -vesta |
| Vesta J 2007-08-07 ch 6, | love the flow. cliffhangerish, too :) -vesta |
| Vesta J 2007-08-07 ch 5, | 2nd place :) good job. even tho its a bit late. i mean the congrats. ...was a bit late. ah, u know what i mean. nice chapter, i love how this is going along. me, being as lost as i am, am reading more just so i understand fully. -vesta |
| Vesta J 2007-08-07 ch 4, | this one a bit short. but no worries. but i don't get it. if his hair fell around his face, wouldn't we not be able to see his ears..? -vesta |
| Vesta J 2007-08-07 ch 3, | very hooky. as in easy to get hooked on. i'm totally clueless about this, yet i can't wait to read more. weird. -vesta |
| Vesta J 2007-08-07 ch 2, | interesting. i can admit i was totally lost at the beginning, though. -vesta |
| Vesta J 2007-08-07 ch 1, | descriptive. -vesta |
| Aiedial 2007-06-08 ch 16, | GAH more more more MORE! please omg i love this and i'm gonna DIE until the next chapter is up. GAHH. next chapter please. i love it. (if you can't tell...lol) LOVE IT! |