Dude. You need to update. T_T I like your story. It roxxorz. ;P

Okey-pokey. Time for the sordid criticisms. Sorry.Um...*I thought it was a bit cliché. *Shaman? I think it should be Shawoman. Really. ;P*You should also probably have her create some more stuff via her pencil of DOOMINATION.Yeah. That's all I can think of.

Catch you later. Evalo sounds like my name. I am so honored. ;P

A nice idea. It's very interesting. I noticed you used the wrong word. You said:

I glanced at my too companions.

when it should be

I glanced at my two companions.

I hope we will learn more about this world for it is really interesting. Keep writing and I can't wait for more.

Wonderful! I must say I wish this was possible. But then, maybe it is! You never know...^_^Keep writing!

...I've been reading stories all day, and I've had words to describe each. But for this there ARE no words. Brilliant, quirky, wonderful...those do little to compliment your writing. How about...the best? Absolutely awesome. I worship you. O.O