|Reviews for shirley temple tragedy|
| addie pray 7/12/05 . chapter 1
This was so beautiful and eloquent. The title drew me in and it got better and better from there. I loved the ending. Well done.
| ttum 6/23/05 . chapter 1
really love the language rhythm as well.
i like i like the last two lines and the second stanza and the opened myself up all the way to monument to imperfection.-smiles.
| Shinyfighter 6/9/05 . chapter 1
Pretty good imagery. You sure it's not about cutting? J/K