 Nina Cross Knyght 2005-07-27 . chapter 1Well, really..I can care less if anyone looks at the people in my story... I'm just setting them up there cause I need somewhere to save them. Go read -My- profile, you'll understand more. Thank you, come again.
Sara Shadows. |
 randomunknown 2005-06-27 . chapter 1the sigh is so ambiguous (sp?) i like it |
 Pixipowder 2005-06-13 . chapter 1It can definately be hard to convey more then a simple feeling or so in something as structured and short as a haiku, but you do an excellant job. I love that it seems like there is so much more to it then just those three lines. |
 littlemaccyd 2005-06-11 . chapter 1o kewl! it's almost as if the witch feels bad for turning the men into beasts with that "sigh" :P |
 Nobody-n-Particular 2005-06-11 . chapter 1It sounds as if the witch is so nonchalant about destroying people's lives. How splendid. Or her point is that men are already beasts and yet they still don't get it, so the sigh is that of the weariness of one who is smarter than everyone else. |
 white-clouds 2005-06-10 . chapter 1The witch sounds tired of being a witch to me. Lol...Nice one! |