Wow, that was a really good story! The character in your story (or perhaps it's you?) Reminded me of me a little bit. Honor student, shy and weak... This was truly enlightening to read.

Hm. Well, I thought this was pretty good. Just, the ending is somewhat... there's really no lead-up to the end. So, it's slightly unconnected in a way, but it's still pretty good. _ Nice work.