This poem gives you an eerie chill that makes you look over your shoulder. Maybe you were looking for that, maybe not. Either way, beautiful poem.

oh! this one gave me chills it was so awesome.

PLease come look at some of my writting. read it all! haha j/k you don't have to but i would appreciate it.

Wow. So, what is there to say that hasn't already been said? Intense and thought provoking, suicide bombings are a hard issue to really think about, and you've written such an amazing poem about it.

Kinda haunting. . . Especially with the last two lines.

Woa... thats awesome! -spazzes-

I'm almost afraid to love this piece. I think that if I do; it'll jump out in all it's glory and chase me down.

absolutely shuddering

DEP

powerful.. love the ending

Very good. The first verse I adore, simply because of the way it suggests that everyone is ignorant because they don't know what the dirt smells like, and they should.

wow, the horror of all this comes across intense very well done i feel, rather, um, ashamed and thankful for my life at the moment Great job!

that was haunting, wonderfully done.

wonderful. deep, dark and tragic and wrapped into a beautiful contemporary feel of war. well done, beautiful work!

!* noelle *!

strong use of repitition.

i liked the first stanza a lot...confident line-breaks..interestingly woven lines. keep writing D

Nice job...I really like the formatting. And the last line is really powerful.