|Reviews for mass suicide for selfproclaimed peace|
| Faithiny 6/28/05 . chapter 1
This poem gives you an eerie chill that makes you look over your shoulder. Maybe you were looking for that, maybe not. Either way, beautiful poem.
| Rozlin 6/27/05 . chapter 1
oh! this one gave me chills it was so awesome.
PLease come look at some of my writting. read it all! haha j/k you don't have to but i would appreciate it.
| evm 6/26/05 . chapter 1
Wow. So, what is there to say that hasn't already been said? Intense and thought provoking, suicide bombings are a hard issue to really think about, and you've written such an amazing poem about it.
| GypsyMothra 6/22/05 . chapter 1
Kinda haunting. . . Especially with the last two lines.
| hypocrite extrodinare 6/15/05 . chapter 1
Woa... thats awesome! -spazzes-
| if sighing 6/13/05 . chapter 1
I'm almost afraid to love this piece. I think that if I do; it'll jump out in all it's glory and chase me down.
| peaceman4ever 6/13/05 . chapter 1
| simpleplan13 6/13/05 . chapter 1
powerful.. love the ending
| pneumothorax 6/13/05 . chapter 1
Very good. The first verse I adore, simply because of the way it suggests that everyone is ignorant because they don't know what the dirt smells like, and they should.
| mizu no kokoro 6/12/05 . chapter 1
wow, the horror of all this comes across intense very well done i feel, rather, um, ashamed and thankful for my life at the moment Great job!
| misssandradee 6/11/05 . chapter 1
that was haunting, wonderfully done.
| poetic abortion 6/10/05 . chapter 1
wonderful. deep, dark and tragic and wrapped into a beautiful contemporary feel of war. well done, beautiful work!
!* noelle *!
| Nobody-n-Particular 6/10/05 . chapter 1
strong use of repitition.
| youzi 6/10/05 . chapter 1
i liked the first stanza a lot...confident line-breaks..interestingly woven lines. keep writing D
| Manda Falcon 6/10/05 . chapter 1
Nice job...I really like the formatting. And the last line is really powerful.