hm...damn chim. read not because i forgot abt your gd writing and my ** writing, but coz was interested. um, this IS the fic right? will read the slash ones later.

very nice, even tho know nth abt icarus and etc, but the descriptns are very pretty, wings and ripples and long words...very nice sentences too. overall lonely feel, quite emptifying, very cool. *nods*

heys. i thought that was nice. the descriptions. heh. is icarus a greek name. m. all those mythology is interesting. :) i wanna fly so high i don't care if i burn my wings XD nicely done. m. the way your main char doesn't listen to what his friend says reminds me of the way icarus doesnt listen to his father and flies too high. m :)well. i liked 'the friend'. XD