i keep reading your poems and there all about pain...you feel black inside...you dont really want that...how much pain do you feel ...what is so bad...i aent saying i dont like this one...i thought it was pretty good...i like the part were you compared yourself to the fire you want to be consumed ect...untill you said you want to be blackend like the apperance inside...i just want to know what gives you so much pain...man...why do i always sound like a prick when i write these...again sorry...but peace

Kinda creepy, but still really good I liked it

I like the link made by the repetition of 'consumed', the edning's particularly good, especially the last line; very powerful.

Very Creepy. An excellent poem.

Kinda wierd, but strangely enough, I like the idea. Nice flow and cool topic! :)