Wow, this is a lot of rage, very nice peom. Go you dude.

Wow, strong topic. You carried this off easily, each stanza reads really well. If I could describe this in one word it'd be powerful. Great job.

Wow. How very impacting. It was powerful. Incredibly powerful. I am stunned and practically speechless.

Wow. Incredible poem.

I think it was really good. It showed a lot of emphasis in what you wanted. Really original.

How sad. I'm sorry that this person mistreated you so and others around them. However, the poem is really good.

Gah~~ the hurt must be simply agonizing~~ but, look to the light ahead, and somehow, you will find the way^^ Great job!!

keep writing!

Strong, but sadly heart-breaking.

Very powerful and thought-provoking. I particularly admired the third stanza, with poking questions interjected between each line. I'm sure there is much more to the story than meets the eye, but I hope everything turns out okay.

wow.. powerful poem... especially the ending

my heart just ... broke as I read this. the impact left by your words wounds and leaves an impression, this is beautiful. as always sumi-chan, I am amazed by your sense of words and your use of them. I hope you never stop caring, that is the best trait a person could have and their own curse (sort-of). I hope you are alright.

!~* noelle *~!