I like its simplicity. Grammatically, I think "He drank on his coffee cup..." would be better if written "He drank from his coffee cup..." Overall, very nice. =)

Short simple and expressive. I like this. Very real and raw.

I really liked it. Short but created a scene and story in a few lines.

Simple, Quick, Sincere. The best kinds of poems. It was very well written. Good job.

coffee cup?despite everything that struck out the most. does he like drinking coffee or is it just something random...other than that its pretty good

wanderful poem! i enjoyed it alot.

SP