Reviews for To Ride A Slingshot

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The Un-great-ful 2006-06-18 ch 1,	abuseYou're so good at capturing obscure feeling in the most basic of things. I wish I could pick at your brain sometime. Keep writing Alan
Nemonus 2006-05-02 ch 1,	abuseSweet! Truely unique and intense anthropomorphism (aw, that isn't the right word...aw...personification? Making the rock seem human) This "Though to dust I will turn you stand there amazed”,/“For that one moment I was able to fly”." is very nice. I also like the title, from whence flows the intensity.
Sarah-Brighteyes 2006-03-03 ch 1,	abuseI think i am slightly amazed. That someone can take the throwing of a rock and compare it as a metaphor to the way we should use our lives. Or at least this is the sort of thing that I got from this. It was almost inspiring...sort of a gospel in itself. "make your life something... make other people worthwhile... no one is a rock" type philosophy. I loved it. I like writers who think outside the box of angsty blood cutting teenage drama and move. Beautiful piece once again. I think I might be addicted to your writing.
cygnus olor 2006-02-14 ch 1,	abusei love the title... i love the last two lines... actually i love all your work. so keep it up! salute :D * ner *
Mikki Amboree 2006-01-28 ch 1,	abuseI love the last line! This is also very well written and worded. Loved it! :)
philod 2005-12-16 ch 1,	abuseThis poem seems to be a mirror in which my own life is held to question. Lovely poem
ronshaberry 2005-12-15 ch 1,	abuseWow. This is so full of great lines. Lovely meaning, very provocative. I like it. I can see why it's going to be published. Speaking of which, congratulations!
AllyCred 2005-11-15 ch 1,	abusei like it, the way you write about this rock, makes me think about my life, for some strange reason! I really like the last line, its like how i wish i could feel, i love it when i can connect with someone's writing in such a meaningful way, great poem, i love it. Lots of love~AC~ P.S.~~thanks for the reviews, i appreciate them a lot.
simpleplan13 2005-10-22 ch 1,	abusebeautifully written (ps. if you have the time could you tell me which of my poems you like best.. I'd really appreciate it. Thanks!)
gopie 2005-10-01 ch 1,	abuseWow. Beautiful. Amazing.
NinjaStoryteller 2005-09-22 ch 1,	abuseOriginal and brilliant. Hah, I was in a really bad mood before I read this. This made me much happier.
A Phantom Stranger 2005-09-20 ch 1,	abuse:) very cool...very impressed. I thought I'd return the favour of your review. I dont understand the awe though yours are brilliant...keep me posted ;P
Shadowe Goddess 2005-09-04 ch 1,	abuseinteresting...
Maisha Mafuriko 2005-09-04 ch 1,	abuseBeautiful, Beautful, Beautifully written and I can not help but to think that too our lives are liken onto that rock that awaits, being crumbled into dust...and then someone enters our life and springs us forward into the vastness of new heights not previously known and for just a little while...we soar. Maisha/Connie
Constant Murdock 2005-09-04 ch 1,	abuseFascinating stuff! I personally think it's a dark way of portraying the monotone of the life of a rock; but I'm a sucker for that kind of thing.

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