Good poem I like it! As of yet i still have not heard this theme on this site Good Job

Oh yeah listen to the song "I think the world needs a drink" by terri clark(not sure of the spelling of her name)It has the same messege

I really really really like the analogy here, this is very creative.

I think it would've been better if there were a little more of a scheme to it, but I've always thought the idea counted more because the words can me manipulated whenever you wish.

I think this may have inspired me to write something with this similar idea, and you will be credited for the inspiration.

This was clever, and I enjoyed it.