Great developement of characters. I like when she was telling off the counsler and said: "You probably just sat alone at your lunch table and fantasized endlessly between bites of tuna salad sandwich about getting the cute guy a few tables done while not noticing that he’s making out with his extremely hot girlfriend" that was really funny. Please continue this story and write more chapters.

Nice story i like it although i think from what I read here so far you are not alone in feeling like this. Well ok you made up a story but i am guessing something of a simalar nature is happening in your life the problem is that i think most writers here write about the same thing it must be something that establishs a writer as a writer.

Anyway i like the story it flows unlike the normal ones here (including my story no name) You are an excllent writer! Keep it up I am sure i will see someof your stuf on the bookshelves before too long!