dudehmi cant think of anythign to say. this is by far the most, well, different poem I've ever read (I'm sure u get that a lot).i love prose poems and old fashion-style poems, and this almost qualifies as both... well not really. kind of.i totally empathize with her thou

If I ever noticeably write for anyone besides myself or my close friends, I give everyone permission to hunt me down and beat the crap out of me. My work is mediocre enough without trying to please the masses. Great poem, it's well written, hilarious and very true!

Nice satire. I enjoyed it.

I admire anyone who can write anything in rhyme ... and this was doubly rhyming so I'm impressed. You have had to say things in a slightly clumsy way to get the rhymes, but who cares, it was fun to read.

Haha, very cute, and I've so felt like that sometimes. Your rhyming is usually pretty good (times/rhymes), but I think that occasionally you stumbled a little. Don't let the construction of the poem get the better of you! But an adorable little ballad and so true of most of the people here on FP. Lovely! =)

Hahaha this was so cute...lord I hope I dont get like that, but perhaps we all wish for some props here and there, though Graves would never be thrown to the dogs, as he is probably my favorite poet. Yet humorous and cute, you made me smile this afternoon thanks.

Gorgeously bitter. I usally dislike rhyming, but this was great. Well done.

haha - absolutely crazing, a weird rhyme scheme and completely random thnking. Love it :) lol