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| K. T. Marie 2006-03-05 ch 2,  | abuse*shudder* oh that's so sad... but it's really good, too. what's gonna happen next? |
| SarahJaneDrkAngl05 2006-02-23 ch 2, | abuseaw i feel so bad for little Billy, it doesnt feel very good to have other kids pick on you or call you names. cant wait to read more. wonder what ever happened to Adam? ~SarahJane |
| SarahJaneDrkAngl05 2006-02-23 ch 1, | abusewow this is really good! she must be in a world of hell right now bc of being raped and not being able to tell Andy she loves him. i cant wait to read more! ~SarahJane |
| Oranges and Lemons 2005-10-29 ch 2, anon. | abuseSO good! It's really intense, and really gripping! You HAVE to write more! You just HAVE to! |
| Smeagol Fasir Kenobi 2005-06-20 ch 2, | abuseThis is very good, and very realistic, told from the perfect point of view. It's good that you're not pointing the blame at one single person. It's better that way, more true to life. Would write more but it's two-thirty in the morning and I need to go to bed soon. Namarie,Smeagol Fasir Kenobi |
| iluvchocolateyathisisshefal... 2005-06-19 ch 2, anon. | abusepoor billy...*hugz billy*...i'd write more, but the brother is calling!(how did she make a mistake if she was raped? and who raped her?) |
| kookykiki 2005-06-18 ch 2, | abuseThis is really good. It makes me so sad, but happy too that Ally survived. Write soon. |
| Ryne 2005-06-18 ch 2, anon. | abuseI love your story; it's wonderfully written and, unlike many stories, fills me with emotion. I hope you have plans for publishing it into book form. If I find it I will definately purchase it. ^_^ |
| randomer 2005-06-18 ch 2, anon. | abuseI'm so glad you followed up on this. It's good to see that Ally survived, and Billy sounds so cute. Do we get to find out her "mistake"?Write soon. Lol. |
| iluvchocolateyathisisshefal... 2005-06-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseomfg that is so good! update soon! |
| randomer 2005-06-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was amazing. The ending comes as such a shock and all you can feel is sympathy for Ally. Really good work, keep it up! |
| midsea 2005-06-11 ch 1, | abuseOoh. I like this. Very powerful, I really wasn't expecting that she had been raped. I also hadn't expected that a prime minister would cheat on his wife! |