Excellent beginning, and great characterizations. Hope to see more soon.

Well I must admit that I very much enjoyed this first chapter of your story. I found no flaws or errors and I think that it is truely very well written. Please do not hesitate to continue as soon as possible! :)

-D.F.

nicely written. has some good potential to be a non-angst slash. lol. how rare are those. seriously nice start. waiting for more.

Awesome! I really like it. You have interesting and stable characters, and I can't wait for an update!