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Reviews For: Its our right

the naked civil servant 2005-08-05 ch 1,	i really like this actually, sometimes it's cool to consciously try + address an Issue you feel strongly about, because the style of writing often changes to fit the mood. this one is really harsh + simple, really powerful.
leben 2005-06-28 ch 1,	I agree with this poem. ((burn the Unitarians!)) just kidding... "When you can ** as many women as you please" - very true. "Why should a child that's not loved / Be brought into this world / Of hate and death and pain / And you pass your laws / That restrict my rights / And restrict my body" powerful, great, good. wow. power to you!
swaggering curses 2005-06-13 ch 1,	I agree. You've got some well-presented arguments in there, though I think that it's a little bit too male-bashing for me. There are some guys out there who take responsibility for their actions, and I don't think that it's right to completely exclude the father of the baby in the decision making, it takes two to tango and all that. But if it comes down to the wire, one for, one against, it is the woman's right to choose. Well-constructed and thought out. =)
darkmistresslae 2005-06-12 ch 1,	Cheers to manda! Nice poem. You really got your point across. Stupid prolife people. gah! attacks I completely agree with your opinion! Yay! Anyways, i was walking with Erin, and we saw this person by BS. Her shirt said 'you can't be catholic and pro-abortion'. Gah! Can you believe it! Stupid person. People aren't pro-abortion. They are pro-choice. And, you're prochoice and catholic. So ha! Poop on her! Oh yes, and the poem.. it's good. I like how you would repeate words, it wokred nicely."And you grin your evil grins/As another young women dies/From an illegal abortion" was probably my favourite part. If you're against abortion, don't have one! Why should a stupid mistake ruin your life! Cheers, again, to Manda! *~Leah

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