 Elmo'z BFF 2009-11-26 . chapter 25mwahahaa. dis is funnee shtuff!! i know this is on hiatus, but i wanted to read it...please update!! i believe in you! loll. like the story! |
 Duuude 2009-10-16 . chapter 22YOU CAN EVEN MAKE THIS THE ENDING:
Adrian goes crazy and murders C.J and gets sentenced 25 yrs to life imprisonment. Brian kills himself because he loses two very important people to him. Sellecks kills himself because he was secretly in love with Brian and also, he lost his sister.
Elliot finally goes to Joe to tell him he likes him. But then it turns out Joe was a serial killer and he kills Elliot after seducing him.
And that's it. Everyone's dead.
OK PLEASE DON'T ACTUALLY DO THAT. But do consider actually ending. Do it for the fans. ;) |
 Duuude 2009-10-13 . chapter 24PLEASE UPDATE.
PLEASE.
PLEASE.
PLEASE.
PLEASE.
PLEASE.
PLEASE.
PLEASE.
PLEASE.
PLEASE.
I don't even care that you say your mind is in a different place now. The next chapter can be a complete 180 from the toen of the other chapters.
BUT PLEASE JUST END IT. PLEASE.
I'm sure I don't need to add another please... Haha.
Think about it! :D |
 A Fictional Angel 2009-09-06 . chapter 25Okay so I know this story hasn't been updated...for 3 years now. But I still just want to say that this story is written EXTREMELY well. Sure it has a few typos, but I forgive people for that as long as they aren't grammatical/obvious spelling errors. I love the characters you have here, they are always clear and have their own strong voices. Not many authors can pull off different POV's so well and I think you are great at it. I have to admit, my favourite character is CJ. :)
I really hope someday you will continue with this story, great job!
From A Fictional Angel |
 macaRone 2009-05-01 . chapter 25Ah.
Your story is amazing.
and you should update real soon,
because rosie said so.
Once again I freaking love your story.
You are a wonderfull person.
WonderFULL I tell you.
update soon. :]
(i was repeating myself through this whole mess of word, but whatever i hope the point is there. The point being that you should update and you are an amazing author. And I'm not just being a suckup cause if I was I wouldn't gain anything and it would be without a point and that would defeat the purpose of this whole thing.) |
 Kalypsopurple 2009-01-06 . chapter 8ARGH!
Okay, a few very sincere requests.
1) Please make her end up with Brian and not Elliot. It's so RIGHT!
and
2) Don't go all antsy and "issues" on me please!! You have a good story, and you haven't done that so far. So please don't! |
 AlphaBeatKayGee 2008-11-20 . chapter 25so! i just read this story and i know for a fact that its one of the funnies things I've ever read. i absolutely adore it. really its quite amazing. i can see you dunno where you're going w. it especially judging from the last time you updated!! anyhow i think you should restart it; one: because I'm left in suspense two: you've got a real good thing going three: so many chapters can't just be leeft abandoned four:...just because you should!! so plz continue intriguing mee. you've got some great ideas and the ultimate laughing source!
-kaygee |
 tigerface. 2008-11-02 . chapter 25I LOVE your story. Quite seriously, actually. There are a few spelling mistakes here and there, but other than that, I think it's really well written. Out of the blue here, but I have a some-what childish request: when you start writing your story again, could you add some more quality Ben and C.J. moments? I'm a tad bit more interested in their relationship than the flip-flopping of Adrian's :] |
 emma 2008-10-31 . chapter 1 hiatus?!?!?!?!
nyo
i just read all the chapters in one afternoon... and then.. it ENDED!
this just can't be happening *hyperventilates*
i need ice cream. pronto.
UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
KISSES X |
 live.laugh.write 2008-07-22 . chapter 9WOOT! REview #911 :D
lawl!
Haha I lovelovelove this chappy. Def my favorite so far!
It's really good :) |
 The_Reviewer 2008-05-29 . chapter 25 Hola Burrito! That story was like totally hilarious. Half the time I was like WTH, but I mean that in a good way lol...if there is a good way...nevermind
Anyhow that really was awesome I expected Elliot and Addy to end up together 'cause thats how stuff usually happens. But you know what they say expect the unexpected...but I've never really understood that how can you expect something thats unexpected...owwie my brain.
Any way good story.
-Signing off now-
~The_Reviewer(To be read with dun dun du dun creepy music) |
 Maxegirl1313 2008-05-28 . chapter 25This is the FUNNIEST THING I'VE EVER READ! please take it off hiatus! PLEASE! I'll... give you virtual cookies? |
 empressofwierd 2008-03-30 . chapter 25I love this story it's one o my favorites. I couldn't stop laughing you have to start writting it again for the sake of man (and woman) kind. |
 RunBabyRun 2008-03-27 . chapter 8woot woot. |
 urjellingcauseimevil 2008-03-16 . chapter 25YOU FOOL! FOOLY FOOL OF FOOLITNTON!! "fool" is hard to say any times in a row.
NO HIATUS. NONONONONONNONONONONONONNONO!
this is my fav story ever and you have put it on HIATUS
*hyperventilates and throws a spork at you*
that, my firend, is a BIG no-no.
update. now! please? |