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| live.laugh.write 2008-07-22 ch 9, | abuseWOOT! REview #911 :D lawl! Haha I lovelovelove this chappy. Def my favorite so far! It's really good :) |
| The_Reviewer 2008-05-29 ch 25, anon. | abuseHola Burrito! That story was like totally hilarious. Half the time I was like WTH, but I mean that in a good way lol...if there is a good way...nevermind Anyhow that really was awesome I expected Elliot and Addy to end up together 'cause thats how stuff usually happens. But you know what they say expect the unexpected...but I've never really understood that how can you expect something thats unexpected...owwie my brain. Any way good story. -Signing off now- ~The_Reviewer(To be read with dun dun du dun creepy music) |
| Maxegirl1313 2008-05-28 ch 25, | abuseThis is the FUNNIEST THING I'VE EVER READ! please take it off hiatus! PLEASE! I'll... give you virtual cookies? |
| empressofwierd 2008-03-30 ch 25, | abuseI love this story it's one o my favorites. I couldn't stop laughing you have to start writting it again for the sake of man (and woman) kind. |
| RunBabyRun 2008-03-27 ch 8, | abusewoot woot. |
| urjellingcauseimevil 2008-03-16 ch 25, | abuseYOU FOOL! FOOLY FOOL OF FOOLITNTON!! "fool" is hard to say any times in a row. NO HIATUS. NONONONONONNONONONONONONNONO! this is my fav story ever and you have put it on HIATUS *hyperventilates and throws a spork at you* that, my firend, is a BIG no-no. update. now! please? |
| Duuude 2008-03-07 ch 25, | abuseOmgsh. I'd just like to ask, 'Are you alive?' xD This is my second time reading this... Please write more. Or... or... or I'll die. I love love love this story. Addy rocks. For seriously. And I love Elliot too. He's too funny. I can't wait until Joe jumps him again ... or maybe the other way around...? Haha. Now that would be awesome. Oh and Brian is just. . . WoW. It's lovely how he keeps on jumping Addy every chance he gets. The "Mwahahaha" part was hilarious. For real. Haha. Write soon, man. I'm sure many others would appreciate ... wait, NO... LOVE it if you actually suddenly came back to life and wrote the next chapter. I would die happy. Seriously. Come back to life soon. |
| sunflowersing 2008-01-13 ch 3, | abuseThis story has really caught my eye. sunflowersing |
| sunflowersing 2008-01-13 ch 1, | abuseHAhahaha! That was really funny! sunflowersing |
| theGreyPebble 2008-01-02 ch 25, | abusethis is a hilarious story and i am SO UPSET about you not continuing this!! I WANT MORE ITS FUNNY ITS HOT ITS ROMANTIC JOE AND ELLIOT WOULD MAKE A SEXY COUPLE ADDY AND BRIAN MAKE A SEXY COUPLE elliot would SO be the girl in the pair... HOT I WANT MORE please... update it? i know its been nearly.. 2? years? ... but please? its good. i want more. the fact that selleck and brian used to argue about whose sister is better is hilarious |
| silvershadow23 2007-12-16 ch 25, | abusesoo...you really should take this off hiatus...(:) i might back you some warm and gooey chocolate chip cookies if you do. lol. |
| Duuude 2007-11-05 ch 23, | abuseno. I know theres to chapters next and then the hiatus.. Damn. THis'll suck, well I hope you get over having a life. xD Or school.. university, whatever you're doing. Cause I really like Addy here and I dont want her to go. She reminds me of me, I'm that crazy. Yeah I am. No one really knows, I tone it down a bit at school. I'm afraid people'll run away. but today, man what I was doing today was just damn scary even for me. Anyway, have a nice life NOT writing insert foot. Which I love. |
| Jessica Wolfheart 2007-11-04 ch 25, | abuseAH! Update please. This story is most excellent. It makes me laugh a lot. There's a few errors but I really don't feel like ponting them out. |
| crazygrl2468 2007-10-08 ch 25, | abuseis that the end. cuz if it is... i reaallyy love this story =] and if it isnt.. well i still reaally love it =] |
| Ri 2007-09-30 ch 25, anon. | abuseOh no! Are you just on hiatus or have you fully given up on this? o_O Well, it's a great story! Love where it was going. My eyes are twitching from staying up hahaha. Man that part about Brian getting his head dunked was so.. unexpected? Cos it doesn't seem like something that would happen to him because of how he is now lolz. Um, hope you'll find the inspiration to finish this someday. :) |